Writing

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For the past few weeks we have been learning to write debates and discussions, but we recently did a test and my score was a 5P.
In the first part of this term we have been doing Fairytales and Narratives. Everyone in our class has been writing a fairytale of our choice. Mine is about three sisters that live in Kingston, Jamaica and they go for a walk in a local forest, then get captured by a dragon. In my story I solved the problem by a magical unicorn named Ira, coming to save them and took them back home. This is my fairytale....

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One day in Far Far Away Land, I was with my sisters at home in Kingston. Kingston, Jamaica. My name is Javina. My two sisters are Danica and Sylvia. We were all really close. I’m the type of girl who likes music, Danica likes sport and things like that, and then Sylvia is the one who likes things like horoscopes, stars and the moon. People always said that our last name was weird, but it was a Jamaican name. Zonileje. Our last name was Zonileje. ======

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So we were at home, we were eating some of those big tiny teddies. They were called ‘Big Teds’. We were really bored, and had nothing to do. Danica went into the hall cupboard and got out Monopoly. I loved this game, because I always won. Sylvia automatically sat down on the ground with us and started to help set the game up. We were playing for about four hours. It was a really long game to play, we had the Jamaican version. It had things like buy a Usain Bolt hat, or buy some Bob Marley music. It was really cool. After we played the game and put it all away, we decided that we’d take a walk in Native Forest. It was the local forest. We got out the door and it was a really nice day. We got to to the entrance of the forest and jumped over the little gate that you had to jump over. We were about 15 minutes into the forest and then we heard a strange noise. Danica looked behind us and she whispered to Sylvia and I that she saw something. Something big. We kept on walking through the forest and then there was a massive crash. ======

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“Not much.. But I thought you would taste nice in my soup”. Creepy Steve bellowed. I thought to myself, and then looked at my sisters. They looked so worried, even Danica, who wasn’t the type to worry about most things. ======

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“What was that ?!” Creepy Steve yelled at the top of his voice. We were all looking around to see what the noise was. It was a Unicorn. A pink fluffy unicorn, dancing on rainbows. She was beautiful. She had the most beautiful sparkly mane and tail. But most of all her eyes were so amazing. They were a baby blue with rainbows in them. ======

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“Right now!” and with the flick of her tail, we were out of the net. Ira picked us up and took us over the top of all the trees in the forest. It was an amazing view, we had never seen anything like this before. ======

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“Just over Kingston High” I told her. She took us over all the famous monuments. There was the Marley Music Note, the Running Shoes and the Bolt Pose, which was just a few blocks away from our house. ======

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“Yup, that house there”. I replied to her, as I showed her our house. She flew lower and lower until she was just above the grass of our front lawn. Danica, Sylvia and I jumped off Ira’s back, making sure we didn’t hurt her, as she was so pretty. ======

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“I will know, and one other thing girls. Magic will help.” Ira told us, then she disappeared so quickly, it was like she was never there. We walked inside to find the T.V still on and it was our favourite show. Magic Creatures. ======

We had to write to write a speech anything we wanted to... I did my speech on Bon Scott.. Here it is..

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 * Bon Scott... ** On the 9th July 1946, Charles Belford (Chick) and Isabelle Scott meet their eldest son for the first time. Ronald Belford Scott... Bon Scott... who became one of Rock’s biggest legends... Bon Scott was born in Forfar in Scotland, and when he was 6 he moved to the sunny suburb of Sunshine, Melbourne Australia. 4 years later he, and his family moved to Fremantle, in Western Australia. In 1956, when the family moved to Fremantle, Bon joined the Fremantle Scots Pipe Band, which is where he learnt how to play the drums. His vocals were inspired by his idol Little Richard, so after working as a postman, bartender and truck packer, in 1964 he started his first band... The Spektors, in which he was the drummer and occasional lead singer. Two years later the Spektors emerged with the another local band, The Winstons, and formed The Valentines, where Scott was co-lead singer with Vince Lovegrove. Scott moved to Adelaide in 1970 and joined the progressive rock band “Fraternity”. In 1974, Bon Scott joined the legendary rock band AC/DC, where he replaced lead singer Dave Evans. He was in the band for 6 years. On the 19th February 1980, after a night of heavy drinking Bon Scott died. It was tragic. He fell asleep in Alistair Kinnear’s car. When Alistair returned he found his friend dead, after Scott choked on his own vomit. He was rushed to Hospital and pronounced “dead on arrival”. The official cause of his death was listed as “acute alcohol poisoning” and “death by misadventure”. Five months after Scott’s death, AC/DC finished the work they had begun with Bon, and released “Back In Black” as a tribute to him with 2 tracks from “Hells Bells” and “Back In Black”, dedicated to his memory. It is now the 3rd best - selling album in history. In the July 2004 issue of Classic Rock magazine, Bon Scott was rated number 1 in a list of the “100 Greatest Frontmen Of All Time”. Hit Parader magazine ranked Bon Scott as 5th on their 2006 list of “100 Greatest Heavy Metal Vocalists Of All Time”. Bon Scott was one of Rock’s biggest legends, and to this day people think of him as being a legend. His music was great. His death was one of Australia’s biggest tragedies. =====